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Missing PiecesI was debating whether to reveal so soon that the sister had been drafted. I was originally going to say she "Got a job" and didn't tell anymore than that, and leave it until later to discover what happened. However, I felt like that raised more questions than it should. Why does nobody miss her presence? Why does Skye not look for her? The more I looked at it, the more it felt like a gaping plot hole than a mystery, so there we have it.Meanwhile, between the memory loss and the drafting of an ex-Warrior after The Wars are supposed to be long over, Jake is quick to read conspiracy between the lines.  |
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